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Re: You aren't Pretty
Yeah, I thought this was quite good! Your first verse, I thought, was especially good. What care I for shining tresses, Long, dark rivers flowing free? Oh, I’ve got a ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Bad Pickup Lines
My personal favourite, from blackadder: "Have I got a canoe in my pants or am I happy to see you?"
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Unsung Hero
"If he is in their town, the people get so much hyper" I think this needs revising. Maybe "...the people get so hyper" "As we can say" This isn't really ...
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: A Girl With Magic and Such (for Ellie's contest)
syte.. LOL
Sep 24, 2009 -
Re: What would your characters do?
Smell her a bit, then decide whether to lick her back. - Tugga, a dog. What would your characters do if a midget threw a pie and it hit them ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: In The Picture
Sit on the strangers lap, I am a dog, after all. And if the boat couldn't hold both our weight, it depends on how much food he gave me that ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: A Story Idea. Some feedback would be great.
Well, just wondering, do you have any other names instead of "master" that I should use? Should I perhaps use the mans actual name, or perhaps a name that the ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: A Story Idea. Some feedback would be great.
Actually, I doubt that, because I plan on killing someone off, perhaps even the dog. Maybe the dog will sacrifice himself for his master.
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: Fanfiction - why is so much of it bad?
I think that the majority of fanfics are terrible because they try to copy right off the direct idea of the fanfic. There are barely any new ideas envolved in ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: A Story Idea. Some feedback would be great.
Tugga is a dog who's owner that he refers to as "master" goes off to war and takes him with him. He becomes one of those pet mascots for the ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: Cats vs. Dogs
Dogs! All the way. Cats freak me out, they're just plain weird in my opinion. Plus dogs don't go skulking around and climbing stuff like cats, and they're usually more ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
I used to use but nobody was reviewing my items so I asked around and my friend "Magic Man" referred me to this site.
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
It was a dark and stormy night... khehehehehehe sorry guys. But to me it is.
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: funny words
blasphemy
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: In The Picture
Tugga would not have a clue as to what was going on as he is a dog, but would enjoy the dominance and attention to no ends. He would most ...
Sep 21, 2009
